miércoles, 14 de octubre de 2009

English essay

A minute after Christina had entered the room, she knew something was wrong. The bedroom was dark and cold, the window was opened, shelves were empty, and all the books were on the floor. A person had been there, and he had been looking for something, but what?

Suddenly she knew what it was, the necklace she found two days ago. It was very beautiful, it glowed a lot and it had a diamond in the center, it seemed very expensive. She founded it in her garden, when she was playing with her dog, called Bryan. She picked it up and left it in a drawer of her room.

She ran to the drawer and opened it, the necklace was there. This meant only one thing, that person would return. She didn’t know what to do; she was so scared to call to the police.

Christina was sixteen years old; she has brown hair and green eyes. She was quite pretty. She lived with her mother, Sally. Christina’s dad died five years ago, in a traffic accident, when she was only eleven.

She cleaned her bedroom and go to sleep, without saying anything to her mother. Next morning she got up very tired, she hasn’t slept very well. She had breakfast while reading the newspaper. Suddenly she was astonished; in the newspaper was a picture of the necklace she found few days ago, it said: “a very expensive necklace was stolen last Wednesday, police is looking for the thief”.

She knew what to do. She called to the police and she told them she has found the necklace. She told them also that a person had been in her room looking for the necklace.

The police arrived very fast and they waited for the thief in Christina’s bedroom. At midnight a person opened the window. The policeman turned on the light and arrested the thief. Thanks to Christina the thief was arrested, and Christina was so happy for that.







THE END

2 comentarios:

  1. Good. Fluent and correct overal. Check the use of Past Pefect in some of the cases and avoid little stupid mistakes like "founded". Try and use recently acquired new vocabulary.

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  2. By the way, you should change the combination of colours in the blog. Hard to read.

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